HIP128: Feedback/editorial change

[Leitet]

This PR makes editorial changes:

1. Reduce emphasis on IoT network usage

Discussions showed that we might have overestimated the use of IoT network in the hip leading many to think that the IoT network will be used more than it is. This commit tones this down a bit by removing words like “substantial” and “significant”.

As of discussion:
https://discord.com/channels/404106811252408320/1257917899319017553/1259214601590014154

2. Standardize capitalization for ENERGY vs ENERGY Subnetwork

After discussion with community and HF we follow this capitalization of Energy/ENERGY:

ENERGY network or Energy network -> ENERGY Subnetwork

As of discussion:
https://discord.com/channels/404106811252408320/1257917899319017553/1258734498686697503
and follow up discussion with HF

3. veENERGY Staking changed to veHNT Delegation

HNT is staked to receive veHNT and then delegated to the Energy subnetwork. ENERGY is not staked to veENERGY.

As of discussion:
https://discord.com/channels/404106811252408320/1257917899319017553/1257964116518109226

4. Formatting of table and linting

Linting and formatting fixed.

5. Clarify DER Host staking

"Stakes ENERGY to qualify DERs for data and VPP service usage"

changed to

"Stakes ENERGY to qualify DERs for additional data and VPP service usage"

[jthiller]

Perhaps we can do this in LaTeX to clean up the syntax.

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$\text{Network Growth Pool Proportion}= 0.5 - \min\left(0.5, 0.5 \times \frac{\text{Total Energy Subnetwork DC burn}}{1e10}\right)$

[jthiller]

$\text{Network Growth Pool Proportion} = 0.5 - \min\left(0.5, 0.5 \times \frac{\text{Total Energy Subnetwork DC burn}}{1e10}\right)$

[jthiller]

I think it would be cleaner to use LaTeX formatting here.

Suggested change

	Network Growth Pool Proportion = 0.5 − min(0.5, 0.5 \* Total ENERGY Subnetwork DC burn / 1e10)
	$\text{Network Growth Pool Proportion} = 0.5 - \min\left(0.5, 0.5 \times \frac{\text{Total Energy Subnetwork DC burn}}{10000000000}\right)$

$\text{Network Growth Pool Proportion} = 0.5 - \min\left(0.5, 0.5 \times \frac{\text{Total Energy Subnetwork DC burn}}{10000000000}\right)$

[Leitet]

Updated description to match commits. Added one commit. See description 5.