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Update cloud-controller.md #7316
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[Developing Cloud Controller Manager](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/developing-cloud-controller-manager/). | ||
For more information about developing plugins, see [Developing Cloud Controller Manager](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/developing-cloud-controller-manager/). | ||
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This section and its subsections are a bit confusing. The required permissions mentioned in the long description (i.e., the sentences) and the lists don't always match up. I'm new to Kubernetes and don't know which are true.
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In version 1.8, the CCM currently runs the following controllers from the preceding list: | |||
The CCM currently runs the following controllers from the preceding list: |
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Don't say "currently". This is called out in our style guide. The idea is that this topic will still be around a year from now, and the reader won't know what we mean by "current".
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@steveperry-53 Thanks for sharing the style guide, I didn't know it existed! I'll replace "version 1.8" with "version 1.9" and remove the other use of "currently".
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@steveperry-53 fixed.
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Clean up grammar and fix inconsistencies.
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