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   - Fix parsing `?ts` query param (contributed by [tulir](https://github.com/tulir))
   - Don't query the database if we could fetch all keys from cache
   - Fix media DB potentially leaking connections
-  - Fixed a bug where we would return that an account exists, if we encountered an error
-  - Edited message could appear twice in search results (contributed by [adnull](https://github.com/adnull))
+  - Fixed a bug where we would return that an account exists if we encountered an unhandled error case
+  - Fixed an issues where edited message could appear twice in search results (contributed by [adnull](https://github.com/adnull))
   - Outgoing threepid HTTP requests now correctly close the returned body (contributed by [ testwill](https://github.com/testwill))
-  - Presence conflicts are now handled differently, reducing the amount of federation requests (contributed by [jjj333-p](https://github.com/jjj333-p))
-  - Internal NATS now uses `SyncAlways` which should improve resilience against crash (contributed by [neilalexander](https://github.com/neilalexander))
+  - Presence conflicts are handled better, reducing the amount of outgoing federation requests (contributed by [jjj333-p](https://github.com/jjj333-p))
+  - Internal NATS now uses `SyncAlways` which should improve resilience against crashes (contributed by [neilalexander](https://github.com/neilalexander))
   - Whitespaces in the `X-Matrix` header are now handled correctly
   - `/.well-known/matrix/server` lookups now timeout after 30 seconds
   - Purging rooms has seen a huge speed-up